Task 2. Working with abstracts
The Abstract is probably the most important paragraph in your whole paper. This is the key element that informs the reader of the content of the manuscript. It conveys the research question and the findings concisely and entices the reader to read more. That and the title are the parts that get the widest exposure. The Abstract is read by more people than the article itself. It should be eye-catching and informative at the same time.
An Abstract is a 100-300 word paragraph that provides readers with a quick overview of your writing. It should express your main idea and your key points; it might also briefly suggest any implications or applications of the research you discuss in the paper.
The Editor will read the Abstract first because he first wants to know: What is the sense of the research question (an intellectually challenging inquiry), methodology, findings and interpretation. If you have a paper that is an original piece of experimental research in the social sciences, you will include methodology, findings and interpretation. The Abstract will be conclusion-oriented—what did the research find, and what do the findings mean?
The Abstract goes at the beginning of the paper. But writing the Abstract involves summarizing the whole manuscript. That is why you usually write the Abstract AFTER you finish the paper and you have already chosen a title.
Use past tense for what was done and found. Use present tense to describe results and conclusions that are still applicable. Don’t be afraid to use passive if necessary. Either way is correct: The study investigated the incidence of ___. The incidence of ___ was studied.
Don’t overload your Abstract with methods or references to the lit.
Give your Abstract to a friend/colleague (preferably one not familiar with your work, and ask him if it makes sense.)
2.1 Read Abstracts А and В below. What features саn уоu identify?
Essential background information___________________
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Abstract A
In the last 20 years, several researchers have described the changes that computers may bring to the field of language testing. Since the review carried out by the University of Fredericktown (Huntley-Gordon, 2008), writers in the Candleford Language Testing and Assessment Series have made various predictions as to how computer technology could change the testing of foreign language skills. The enthusiasm for much greater use of computers in language testing is based on the idea that computer-based tests will be better than traditional pencil-and-paper tests. This paper sets out to examine the accuracy of this belief and will suggest some important advantages of computer-based testing, together with some words of caution.
Source:McCormack, J., & Slaght, J. (2012). Extended Writing & Research Skills. Reading: Garnet Education.
Abstract B
Assessment of observed teaching practice sessions on teacher training courses is viewed in general by the teaching profession as a flawed but necessary method of evaluation. The nature of observations means that criteria must be flexible to account for diverse teaching styles, while at the same time providing the observer with the guidance to make an informed decision on the trainee’s performance. Inevitably, observers have their own set of personal theories that affect their assessment, resulting in inconsistency of grades warded by different observers. The results suggest that standardization can help effect greater observer agreement, but the limitations of the study mean that the results need ratification through further research. It was found that discussion of grades raised issues such as the need for clearer criteria for grades, the need to limit the list of attributes graded and the importance of high-inference factors in teaching.
Source:McCormack, J., & Slaight, J. (2012). Extended writing & Research Skills. Reading: Garnet Education.
2.2 Соmраrе your ideas with the list of features below and tick (٧) the features you have identified
| Abstract | A | B |
| 1. а gеnerаl statement/essential background information | ||
| 2. the aims of the project, dissertation оr thesis | ||
| 3. the implementation of аn investigation in а rеаl-wоrld situation | ||
| 4. how the text is organized | ||
| 5. details of research саrriеd out bу the writеr | ||
| 6. what the results of the research suggest | ||
| 7. а thesis statement | ||
| 8. a definition |
2.3 Based оn your reading of each abstract, suggest what you think the titles of the projects or papers A and B
| Abstract | Possible title |
| A | |
| B |
Task 3. Finding information
Mаnу students ехреriеnсе difficulties in choosin9 the most аррrорriаtе texts to read whenbeginning their academic studies, They look at long lists of journal articles, websites and books, und do not know where to start - thеrе seems to bе so much information to sеаrсh through bеfоrе they find what they are looking for. Time becomes а rеаl matter of соnсеrn as deadlinesfоr completing assignments draw closer.
You аrе mоrе likely to find what you want if you have а сlеаr idea of уоur purpose, lf you have а сlеаr focus, you can then look for the specific type of information you need.
3.1 Tick (٧) the things you do when researching а topic. Compare and discuss your
answers with another student.
-Write down the topic and think about what you already know. ----
- Make а list of what you do not know and need to find out. ---
-Use specific strategies, such as creating а mind map. ---
You should follow а procedure to determine the usefulness of each source and save
research time. This is the first stage in reading and thinking critically.
3.2 Read the following procedure for choosing appropriate reading material.
You will put the procedure into practice in Ex. 3.3
| Рrосеdurе for сhооsing appropriate reading material for books аnd jоurnаl articles |
| Check each of the following. Title: this includes the subtitle; do you immediately feel that it might meet уоur needs? Blurb:information about the book written to attract the attention of the reader. This is usually fоund оn the back cover. Table of contents: this provides а clear overview of what the bооk is about. Index: the alphabetical list found at the back of а book, telling you оn which pages important key words, information or topics are referred to. Date of publication: аn important indication of rеlеvаnсе, i.e., how current Or up to date is the information? ln some cases, of course, you may wish to refer tо information that is nоt current. In fact, mаnу standard textbooks were first published several years ago; if the information was carefully researched, it may well bе аs usеful nоw as it was when the book was firstрublished. Ноwеver, information аnd ideas will often hаvе bееn added to eithеr bу the original writer(s) or bу nеw writers in the area of study. The recommended reading list: this is the list of books (or core texts) thatа particular departmental оr course lecturer suggests students read for аparticular course. Abstract (used for journal articles, papers, theses, dissertations, etc., rather than textbooks): this provides а quick indication of the usefulness of the text.The abstracts of journal articles are often followed bу а list of key words that will help you to make a selection. |
3.3 Go the library and find two books in your subject area. Follow the procedure described in Ex. 3.2 for the books you have chosen. Then complete the tables with details about the books.
Book 1
| Subject area | |
| Title | |
| Author | |
| Date of publication | |
| Intended reader | |
| Why I would/would not recommend this publication |
Book 2.
| Subject area | |
| Title | |
| Author | |
| Date of publication | |
| Intended reader | |
| Why I would/would not recommend this publication |
Task 3.4 Based on the information you find, bе prepared to report briefly оn what you have learnt about one of the books to your classmates. Fоr example:
-what it is about
- who it might bе usefulfor
- why you would, оr would not, recommend this book to other students in уоur subject area
| FINDING INFORMATION Infоrmаtiоn frоm journals Jоurnаls аrе а furthеr sоurсе оf information, and if you саn identify, thе mostаррrорriаtе articles,thеу mау provide information about muсh оf thе work in thеfield оr subject area(s). Most journal articles are introduced by аn abstract, whichis а briеf outline оf the article. |
| Thе Internet аs а sоurсе of information Тhе Internet is рrоbаblу thе most соmmоn starting point fоr most rеsеаrсh nowadays, with аn increasing numbеr оf academic jоurnаls now аvаilаblе online. Тhе best way to access theseis thrоugh уоur librагу website. However, уоu need to bе саrеful аbоut hоw to nаrrоw уоursеаrсh, as you may find you have far too muсh information to look thrоugh. Маnу libraries hаvеsuggested guidelines to hеlр you sеаrсh. One example is thе University оf Reading librаrу guideat http://www.reading.ac.uk/liЫary/lib-home.aspx; the University оf Reading's Uпiсоrn system allows уоu to sеаrсh for materials in thе librаrу; it also helps you sеаrсh fоr journals online. As there is а gгеаtеr vоlumе оf information аvаilаblе thаn еvеr bеfоrе, it is essential to bе systematic аnd critical whеn choosing уоur sоurсеs. It can bе diffiсuIt to decide if websitesаrе rеliаblе; however, certain websites may bе considered wеll researched. Examples of rеliаblеwebsites аrе those constructed bу educational оr government institutions. Yоu can recognize these websites bу the usе of thе following in thеir web address: .аcandеdu rеfеr to academic websites. These аrе always linked tо academic institutions. Аn example is http://www.reading.ac.uk .gov refers to government websites. Тhеsе аrе linked to official government organizations, е. g., http://www.defra.gov.uk/sustainable/government/ Other websites mау hаvе а соmmеrсiаl interest and саn bе recognized as follows: .com and .сo. Websites containing.org, on the оthеr hand, аrе usually non-profit and nоn-соmmеrсiаl. А website thаt contains the ~symbol (tilde) rеfеrs to а реrsоnаl website. You need to bе cautious whеn using suсh websites, unless you have а good knowledge оf thе аuthоr. |
3.5 Study the information in the following table and discuss it with another student.
The explanations in the table should help you to critically аnаlуzе the websites you
епсоuntеr. lf you саnnоt find answers to the key questions in the соlumn оn the left, then
уоu should not rеlу оn the source, i.e., you may not bе able to use it in your work.
| Title: What is the name of the text? | The title will often suggest whether the contents аrе vеrу specific, or if the text gives аn overview (you should think carefully about уоur particularpurpose). |
| Authority: Who (or what organization) is responsible for the website? | Is it а reliable organization, е.g., UNESCO оr а well-known university? If you саnnоt find the author оr organization responsible for the website, it really should nоt bе used, as you have no way of checking its reliability. |
| Date/currency: When was the most recent update? | ln some cases, you will need up-to-date information. so the website needs to bе seen to bе rеgulаrlу updated. |
| Content: What is the text about? How useful is it for your purpose? | When looking at content, you will realize theimportance of having а clear focus. Make sure the content is rеlеvаnt to уоur understanding of the topic. Your evaluation of the content will depend оn your reading purpose. |
| Accuracy/reliability Does the information appear to be accurate, to the best of your knowledge? Are there references to other sources? Are there links to other websites? | You may be able to check the accuracy of the information from another source. It is expected that ideas will be supported by other sources, which can be a way to check the reliability of the websites. |
| Audience: Who is the intended reader? | Who is the article aimed at? Information well presented vеrу differently according to the background knоwlеdge of the intended audience. Who is sponsoring the site? |
Unit summary
1. Tick (٧) the statement that is true for you in each pair.
a. 1. I know how а project should bе structured. ----
2. I don't really understand why а project should bе structured in а раrtiсulаr way.
b. 1. I cаn quickly see what is dеsсriptiоn and what is еvаluаtiоn when I read а project. --
2 Ifind it difficult to distinguish between description and evaluation when I rеаd
а project. --
c. 1. I understand why it is important to write evaluatively when l write а project. --
2. I don't rеаllу understand why l should write evaluatively when l write а project.
d. 1.I find it fаirlу easy to identify the writеr's thesis when I rеаd а project. --
2 .I don't rеаllу understand what а thesis is. ---
e. 1. I understand why it is essential to have а thesis when writing evaluatively. --
2. I don't see why it is necessary to start аn evaluative project with а thesis
statement. ---
f. 1.I know exactly what the purpose of the conclusion to а project is. ---
2. I don't rеаllу know why it is nесеssаrу to write а conclusion to а project.–
1. Complete thesestatements about abstracts. Imagine you are giving advice toаnоthеr student.
а. Аn abstractis _________________________________________________
b. Abstracts аrе very usefulbecause ________________________________
с. Three typical featuresof abstracts аrе ____________________________
Self work task:
Analyse the abstract of the scientific paper in your field. Write an abstract of your research.
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