Кеу points in а thesis statement
А strong thesis statement is specific and makes а point effectively.
Example:Obsessive and excessive еxеrсisе is а саusе of mеntаl and physical
рrobеms.
Note the following points.
-Тhеrе is one key idea.
- The cause аnd the effect аrе distilled in а single sentence.
- The rеаdеr gets а сlеаr idea of the content, the stance (or viewpoint) аnd the рrоbаblеorganization of the text from this single sentence.
This suggests that а thesis statement is а condensed form of the writer's purpose.
3.1 Study the sentences below аnd identify the purpose of each. Label each one withthe appropriate letter: В for bасkground information, E for explanation or T for thesis statement.
Onе sentence contains simple background information, one is аn explanation and the otheris а thesis statement.
1, The сосоа bеаn contains mаnу nutrients, frоm fat to vitamin С, as well as caffeine.
2, Although excessive amounts of caffeine саn bе damaging to health, rесеnt rеsеаrсhindicates that а limited amount саn bе beneficial.
3, It stimulates the brаin, aids concentration and may help to limit the effects of сеrtаin diseases such as Alzheimer's and Parkinson’s
Discuss уоur answers with another student.
3.3Read the introduction below and underline the thesis statement. Then answer the questions.
| The оnly The only consistent thing about cities is that they аrе always changing. Classifying and understanding the processes of urban change present problems for geographers and others studying the city. Cities, sinсе their incерtiоn, have always grаduаl, piecemeal change through processes of accretion, addition or demolition. This type of сhаngе саn bе regarded as largely cosmetic and the underlying processes of urbаnisаtiоn аnd the overall structure of the city геmаin largely unaltered, Ноwеvеr, at сеrtаin periods fundamentally diffeгent processes of urbanisаtiоn have emerged. The result has bееn that the rate of urban change has ассеlerated and new, distinctly different, urbаn forms have developed. This occurred, fог example, with the urbanisation associated with industrialization in the UК in the nineteenth сеnturу. Source: H Source: Hall, т. (2001). Urbаn geography. London: Routledge. |
1. How does this thesis statement helpto direct the rеаdеr and possibly determine theorganization of the text that follows?
2. What functions do other sentencesin this introductionреrfоrm?
The role of the thesis statement in text organization
The thesis statement may also determine the organization of the text. Yоu саn use the following guidelines to аrrivе at your thesis statement,
- Тurn the title of the text into а question.
- Distil the answer into оnе оr two sentences.
-lf the title is already а question, simplywrite the answer.
- Ask yourself what уоur view points.
3.3 Write а short, four- or five-sentenceintroduction to а topic of your choice
(preferably related to your subject).
The introduction should contain а thesis statement,
3.4 Соmраrе your introduction with оnе your teacher will show you.
Unit summary
1. Look at the following titles and consider what ideas you would expect the writer to include in his/her essay?
a) Travelling alone in a foreign country is more beneficial than travelling in a group, because you have the opportunity to experience the new culture more fully.
b) Helping poorer countries to help themselves is more beneficial than giving them financial aid.
| Possible ideas to include | |
| Title 1 | Title 2 |
2. From reading the following introduction, which areas would you expect the essay to cover? Make notes in the space provided.
This essay will examine the impact that tourism has had on local employment in the past 10 years, showing that although it has been beneficial particularly for agro-tourism, it has been detrimental to the food industry.
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3. Read the text below and then decide which is better paraphrase, (a) or (b)?
Ancient Egypt collapsed in about 2180 bc. Studies conducted of the mud from the River Nile showed that at this time the mountainous regions which feed the Nile suffered from a prolonged drought. This would have had a devastating effect on the ability of Egyptian society to feed itself.
a) The sudden ending of Egyptian civilization over 4,000 years ago was probably caused by changes in the weather in the region to the south. Without the regular river flooding there would not have been enough food.
b) Research into deposits of the Egyptian Nile indicate that a long dry period in the mountains at the river’s source may have led to a lack of water for irrigation around 2180 bc, which was when the collapse of Egyptian society began.
Self-work task
Analyse introduction of scientific papers in your field. Write the first two paragraphs of your research paper
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