Выставление баллов в схему оценивания и протокол. Прослушивание ответа учащегося и его оценивание по критериям
ШАГ 2.
Прослушивание ответа учащегося и его оценивание по критериям
2.1.Прослушивание ответа учащегося и его оценивание по критерию «Решение коммуникативной задачи»
Ответ учащегося
Entertainments plays… play a great role in our life. In first picture you can see three people. They are sitting and they are laughing. So you can see the weather is bright brilliant. In the second picture you can see friends. Mm They are sitting in sofa in the room. The pictures have everything common. Firstly, we …we… can see people. Secondly, eh they are happy because they eh they like to have a rest. Moreover, moreover, they are laughing. This picture are different eh. In the first picture you can see winter. In the second picture you can see room. In the first picture you can see three people, in the second picture you can see four people mm. I would prefer eh watching… I would prefer second picture because I like eh to watch TV and… I like to eat popcorn.
| Решение коммуни-кативной задачи | Аспект 1. Краткое описание фотографии (что происходит на фото и где) дано | Неполный ответ, не указано место действия на первой картинке, на второй -указано. In first picture you can see three people. They are sitting and they are laughing. So you can see the weather is bright brilliant. In the second picture you can see friends. Mm They are sitting in sofa in the room. |
| Аспект 2. Ответ на вопрос о сходстве фотографий дан | Ответ дан. The pictures have everything common. Firstly, we… we… can see people. Secondly, eh they are happy because they eh they like to have a rest. Moreover, moreover, they are laughing. | |
| Аспект 3. Ответ на вопрос о различиях дан | Ответ дан: This picture are different eh. In the first picture you can see winter. In the second picture you can see room. In the first picture you can see three people, in the second picture you can see four people mm. | |
| Аспект 4. Ответ на вопрос о предпочтениях экзаменуемого дан | Ответ неточный: I would prefer …eh watching… I would prefer second picture (принимается второй ответ, так как учащийся исправился) | |
| Аспект 5. Обоснование своих предпочтений дано | Ответ дан: because I like eh to watch TV and… I like to eat popcorn | |
| Объем высказывания | 15 фраз | |
| Итоговый балл (максимальный бал – 3) | 2 балла (неполный ответ в 1 из 2 случаев. и неточный ответ) |
2.2.Прослушивание ответа учащегося и его оценивание по критерию «Организация текста»
Ответ учащегося
Entertainments plays… play a great role in our life. In first picture you can see three people. They are sitting and they are laughing. So you can see the weather is bright brilliant. In the second picture you can see friends. Mm They are sitting in sofa in the room. The pictures have everything common. Firstly, we …we… can see people. Secondly, eh they are happy because they eh they like to have a rest. Moreover, moreover, they are laughing. This picture are different eh. In the first picture you can see winter. In the second picture you can see room. In the first picture you can see three people, in the second picture you can see four people mm. I would prefer eh watching… I would prefer second picture because I like eh to watch TV and… I like to eat popcorn.
| Организация высказы-вания | Наличие вступительной и заключительной фразы, завершенность высказывания | Нет заключительной фразы |
| Логичность и использование средств логической связи | Entertainments plays play a great role in our life. (нелогичный переход) In first picture you can see three people. They are sitting and they are laughing. So (нелогичное употребление слова-связки) you can see the weather is bright brilliant. In the first picture you can see winter. In the second picture you can see room. (непонятное сравнение) | |
| Итоговый балл (Максимальный балл – 2) | 1 балл |
2.3.Прослушивание ответа учащегося и его оценивание по критерию «Языковое оформление текста»
Ответ учащегося
Entertainments plays… play a great role in our life. In first picture you can see three people. They are sitting and they are laughing. So you can see the weather is bright brilliant. In the second picture you can see friends. Mm They are sitting in sofa in the room. The pictures have everything common. Firstly, we …we… can see people. Secondly, eh they are happy because they eh they like to have a rest. Moreover, moreover, they are laughing. This picture are different eh. In the first picture you can see winter. In the second picture you can see room. In the first picture you can see three people, in the second picture you can see four people mm. I would prefer eh watching… I would prefer second picture because I like eh to watch TV and… I like to eat popcorn.
| Языковое оформление высказы-вания | Максимальный балл – 2 | Лексико-грамматические ошибки: Entertainments (грамматическая ошибка) plays play a great role in our life. They are sitting in sofa (неправильное ударение) (неправильное употребление предлога, отсутствие артикля)(неправильное ударение) in the room(неправильное употребление артикля). The pictures have every(лексическая ошибка) in common. Firstly, we we… can see people. Secondly, eh they are happy because they eh they like to have a rest. Moreover, moreover, they are laughing (фонетическая ошибка). This picture(грамматическая ошибка) are different eh. In the first picture you can see winter(лексическая ошибка). In the second picture you can see room(отсутствие артикля). In the first picture you can see three people, in the second picture you can see four people mm. I would prefer eh watching I would prefer second picture(отсутствие артикля) because I like eh to watch TV and… I like to eat popcorn. 0 баллов |
Выставление баллов в схему оценивания и протокол
Задание 4 устной части ЕГЭ по иностранным языкам (сравнение 2-х фото). Дополнительная схема оценивания
| НОМЕР БЛАНКА | |||||||||||
| 1. Решение коммуникативной задачи (Содержание) | Аспект 1. Краткое описание фотографий (что происходит на фото и где) дано | +- | |||||||||
| Аспект 2.Ответ на вопрос о сходстве фотографий дан | + | ||||||||||
| Аспект 3.Ответ на вопрос о различиях дан | + | ||||||||||
| Аспект 4.Ответ на вопрос о предпочтениях экзаменуемого дан | - | ||||||||||
| Аспект 5.Обоснование своих предпочтений дано | + | ||||||||||
| ИТОГОВЫЙ БАЛЛ (максимальный балл – 3) | |||||||||||
| 2. Организация | Наличие вступления и заключения, завершенность высказывания | +- | |||||||||
| Логичность и использование средств логической связи | - | ||||||||||
| ИТОГОВЫЙ БАЛЛ (максимальный балл – 2) | |||||||||||
| 3. | ЯЗЫКОВОЕ ОФОРМЛЕНИЕ ВЫСКАЗЫВАНИЯ (максимальный балл – 2) |
Оценка: 3 балла.
ШАГ 2.
Прослушивание ответа учащегося и его оценивание по критериям
2.1. Прослушивание ответа учащегося и его оценивание по критерию «Решение коммуникативной задачи»
Ответ учащегося
New Year is my favourite holiday. I always relax and have fun while celebrating it. And now I'm going to speak about these two pictures. I am going to contrast and compare these photos. Let's examine the first one. In the picture there is a family of four persons. They are sitting in a living room at home. And they are celebrating New Year. There are two parents on the picture and two daughters. Besides, there's a nice Christmas tree in the picture. The second picture shows us a family of three persons. There is a boy in the middle and two his parents who are kissing him. Besides, there is a birthday cake on the table before them and they seem to be celebrating boy's birthday. Аnd the common thing here is holidays and the main similarity between these two photos is that they show us families that are celebrating holidays. Besides, people on both of these pictures are very happy and they are smiling. However, the difference between these two photos is the number offamily members, four on the first picture and three on the second. And myselfif I had to choose one of these two pictures I'd choose the first one because I like New Year much more than birthday.
| Решение коммуни-кативной задачи | Аспект 1. Краткое описание фотографии (что происходит на фото и где) дано | Ответ дан, но описание подробное вместо краткого, не указано, где происходит действие на второй картинке.In the picture there is a family of four persons. They are sitting in a living room at home. And they are celebrating New Year. There are two parents on the picture and two daughters. Besides, there's a nice Christmas tree in the picture. The second picture shows us a family of three persons. There is a boy in the middle and two his parents who are kissing him. Besides, there is a birthday cake on the table before them and they seem to be celebrating boy's birthday. |
| Аспект 2. Ответ на вопрос о сходстве фотографий дан | Ответ дан.Аnd the common thing here is holidays and the main similarity between these two photos is that they show us families that are celebrating holidays. Besides, people on both of these pictures are very happy and they are smiling | |
| Аспект 3. Ответ на вопрос о различиях дан | Ответ дан.However, the difference between these two photos is the number offamily members, four on the first picture and three on the second. | |
| Аспект 4. Ответ на вопрос о предпочтениях экзаменуемого дан | Ответ дан, но неточный, так как выбирает картинку, а не деятельность.And myselfif I had to choose one of these two pictures I'd choose the first one… | |
| Аспект 5. Обоснование своих предпочтений дано | Ответ дан, но аргументация слабая. ...because I like New Year much more than birthday. | |
| Объем высказывания | 17 Фраз | |
| Итоговый балл (максимальный бал – 3) | 2 балла |
2.2.Прослушивание ответа учащегося и его оценивание по критерию «Организация текста»
| Организация высказы-вания | Наличие вступительной и заключительной фразы, завершенность высказывания | Вступление есть, но неоправданно большое (избыточная информация). New Year is my favourite holiday. I always relax and have fun while celebrating it. And now I'm going to speak about these two pictures. I am going to contrast and compare these photos. Let's examine the first one. Заключения нет. |
| Логичность и использование средств логической связи | Нарушена логика при переходе от своих предпочтений к описанию, что на фото. New Year is my favourite holiday. I always relax and have fun while celebrating it. And now I'm going to speak about these two pictures. Аnd (неправильное употребление слова-связки) the common thing here is holidays... And (неправильное употребление слова-связки) myselfif I had to choose one of these two pictures | |
| Итоговый балл (Максимальный балл – 2) | 1 балл |
2.3.Прослушивание ответа учащегося и его оценивание по критерию «Языковое оформление текста»
Ответ учащегося
New Year is my favourite holiday. I always relax and have fun while celebrating it. And now I'm going to speak about these two pictures. I am going to contrast and compare these photos. Let's examine the first one. In the picture there is a family of four persons. They are sitting in a living room at home. And they are celebrating New Year. There are two parents on the picture and two daughters. Besides, there's a nice Christmas tree in the picture. The second picture shows us a family of three persons. There is a boy in the middle and two his parents who are kissing him. Besides, there is a birthday cake on the table before them and they seem to be celebrating boy's birthday. Аnd the common thing here is holidays and the main similarity between these two photos is that they show us families that are celebrating holidays. Besides, people on both of these pictures are very happy and they are smiling. However, the difference between these two photos is the number of family members, four on the first picture and three on the second. And myselfif I had to choose one of these two pictures I'd choose the first one because I like New Year much more than birthday.